What is really required to get red of Somali pirates more effectively.
2. Thesis
The most essential things for getting rid of Somali pirates are both the improvement of standard of living of Somali people and strict regulations against foreign pirates who practice piracy off the coast of Somalia.
3. Main parts
① Historical background of Somalia.
[The history of Somalia is deeply related to the trends of many Western countries and it is not too much to say that Somalia was baffled by them.]
A. History by the end of WWⅡ
B. History during Cold War
C. History after Cold War
②The origin of Somali pirates.
[There are two kinds of Somali pirates, though the latter one is not so widely known.]
A. The first kind of Somali pirates who had been fishermen.
B. The second kind of Somali pirates who had come from another countries.
C. The common points and different points between former and latter.
③ The countermeasures which is actually done by international society to Somali pirates.
[International society continues to make much efforts in order to get rid of Somali pirates with various countermeasures.]
A. The countermeasures which are done by the UN.
B. The countermeasures which are done by each country.
C. The countermeasures which are done by pirates against the former ones.
④The reason why Somali pirates have continued to practice piracy regardless of the effort of international society.
[There are both inner problems and outer problems.]
A. Inner problem which is mainly related to the present situation of Somalia.
B. Outer problem which is the problem of countermeasures done by the UN, The US, or another countries.
4. Sourse list
Hi Sae,
ReplyDeleteYour research question and thesis look excellent!
In your Outline's main sections, it looks like you do not have main sections for explaining your two solutions.
Make sure you use two fat, detailed paragraphs (or more) to explain your solutions, which are your main points. Don't fill the body with too much background and fail to explain the key points.
Good luck with creating the draft and let me know if you have questions!
Thank you very much for your useful comment, Mark.
ReplyDeleteI will think over the body of my essay once more.